Tuesday, January 25, 2011

"Perfect Crush"

Hey,
My new murderer,
Where are your knives?
Buried in me,
And the deeper you get
The better it feels
I don't mind when you're killing...

Hey,
My Beautiful Pain,
Your touch is like fire
Burning through me;
And the deeper you get
The more it heals
I don't mind if you're killing...

Hey,
My angry goddess,
Where is your vengeance?
Directed at me,
And the more fierce you get
The worse it feels,
But I don't mind when you're killing...

My heart's collapsing
Beneath her weight
A perfect crush
In an imperfect world

1 comment:

  1. The structure is interesting, but the imagery does not resonate with me. Good attempt though.

    Lee
    Tossing It Out

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